Kissing the sun in a clear blue sky
Was an experience unmatched, I thought
Riding the wings of a flying bird
And the euphoric sense it brought
High and mighty, I covered miles
Bathing in the scoffing rains
Jittery wind hummed victory songs
As I crisscrossed the celestial lanes
The world below seemed so measly
As I ruffled my feathers of pride
Flying high on the wave of success
Forgot to take the string in stride
A forceful surge is all it took
For the string to tremble and break
Nosediving to kiss the earthen lips
I resembled a shambling wreck
High of highs and thrill of peak
At best last some days and nights
But to sail in air and avoid a fall
We need to learn from Kites
Bhai dedh saal se comment kar raha hun. Saare shabd khatam ho chuke hain. :P
ReplyDeleteI can only say, you are a true writer, Ashish. You'll soon master all forms of writings. Marvelous piece of poetry! :)
hahaha. Thanks Lebnox. You are very kind :)
ReplyDeleteRead you after many days, read something 'Good' after many days. :)
ReplyDeleteHey Prateek! Thanks a lot:) Nice to see you back here!
ReplyDeleteAhhh...this was refreshing...I like the way you frame sentences with scattered words! And ohh...this was inspiring too!!:)
ReplyDeletekudos!
Keep blogging!:)
Thanks mansi :))
ReplyDeleteGreat Work Mr. AA...
ReplyDeletethank you Megha :))
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